Darious at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

My thoughts to Snowboarding On Mt. Pilcher

I found a poem in Space #3 by Alexandra from Marshall, Alaska.

I like “Snowboarding On Mt. Pilcher” because the poem makes snowboarding sound like fun.

One  part that stands out for me is “Some kids sweat from the warm winter sun.” I think this part is interesting because how can people sweat in the winter. But it is possible to sweat in the cold but its kind of wierd.

Another part that I like was “Snowboarding and sliding is so much fun!” This stood out to me because I can feel her excitement.

I look forward to seeing what Alexandra makes next because what she wrote is interesting.