Darious at EBAFF, Bronx, NY
Jun 13
my response to "school"
I found a poem in Space #3 by Jonah
I enjoyed “School” because school is everything he said. School can be fun sometimes and others it can be boring.
On part that stands out for me is “You gather a bunch of cool little things to remember school.” I think this is a nice part because over the yer in school you will gather knowledge, thoughts, etc. about what happened in school over the year. After you gather all of the information you will have a memory.
Another part that stands out for me is “You feel like a dork to do so much work on a piece of paper.” This stood out to me because I feel like a dork too when I do so much work on one peace of paper.
I look forward to seeing what Jonah makes next because i enjoyed the poem.
Jun 10
My thoughts on the poem “Snowboarding On Mt. Pilcher”: dairouso.tu…
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My thoughts to Snowboarding On Mt. Pilcher
I found a poem in Space #3 by Alexandra from Marshall, Alaska.
I like “Snowboarding On Mt. Pilcher” because the poem makes snowboarding sound like fun.
One part that stands out for me is “Some kids sweat from the warm winter sun.” I think this part is interesting because how can people sweat in the winter. But it is possible to sweat in the cold but its kind of wierd.
Another part that I like was “Snowboarding and sliding is so much fun!” This stood out to me because I can feel her excitement.
I look forward to seeing what Alexandra makes next because what she wrote is interesting.
Jun 04
Do you think sports are a waste of money?I think some sports are.
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are sports a waste of money?
do you think sports are a waist of money?
i think that sports are not a waist of money is not a waist of money but some sports are. i think that golf is a wast of money because you have to stand there a watch the person hit the golf ball. plus you cant make any noise. tennis is an active sports and its good for your health but its a competitive sports. you have to run a lot in that sport. so do you think i think that tennis is a waist of money? i think its not.
i don’t think sports are a waste of money
not all sports are a waste of money because some are fun and some are exiting. some sports should be a game is free of just played for fun and not for money and prize because its very boring. sports like soccer, basketball, foot ball, etc. the one that you can make a noise than that is an enjoyment. i think golf is a waste because its boring and you just have to hit a golf ball with all of your strength.
May 20
What would you do?
If was lost in a forest and you saw a grizzly bear what would you do? On TV i saw a man that played dead when he saw a grizzly bear. do you think it worked? well it did. when he playing dead the grizzly was practecly eating his head and arm.
May 15
Skye I dont think that the atmospher will vanish but it will get damege
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